Is it taboo to have a brief mention of another character's interaction in a paragraph or must we start a new one? Basically, which is best: (Faster-Paced, but does the sentence referring to the woman throw us from the narrative? Just fyi- she usually wears a leather jacket) (Correct- maybe? But it chops it up and we lose flow: ) (The only way to reconcile them by losing the faster-paced rhythm: ) I can go with the last example no problem, but I'd still like to know the protocol for future use. Thanks!