OK, I was wondring whether or not that this plot was ok or not, or whether it was too cliche ect. An unkillable man saves a woman from a pack of beasts. She has orders to get to the queen of the three worlds, and so the two travel together. In another completely different world, Hell has just won a massive victory over Heaven, and the main villain has melded the two together. In the other worlds, shards of a sword have been discovered. The man and the woman are still travelling, when more beasts attack and the woman is killed. The man discovers that she holds the last shard, and when he touches it, the other shards gravitate to it and he is given the only weapon that can kill the villain. More happens after that, and I can be far more elaborate, but I want to know whether you would be more interested in hearing the rest before I post it.