I am a Chinese, already graduated from the university. I have intense desire to hone my English writing skills. Last year I processed the GRE and TOEFL tests, still, my writing skills are shameful. It is hard for me to find an excellent English teachers to guide me. And that is is why my GRE analytical writing mark is only 3 point while that of writing section of TOEFL is 23. Since I am hot at pursuing a PhD degree in a prestigious university of USA, the writing techniques for me is very huge. Hereby I registered as a number in this forum, having the expectation of meeting some who may be so kind to read, revise my writing passages and give some advices. For my project, I will post a thread and give the title and copy my passage. Then maybe you could read them and give the recommendations. After I read your response, I will make a revising edition out according to your advices. I will really appreciate your responses. Thanks in advance.