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    Can someone critique me on my iambic pentameter.

    Discussion in 'The Craft of Writing Poetry' started by NewHorizon92, Oct 4, 2017.

    I'm trying my hands at poetry for awhile now to try to express myself and was wondering if anyone can tell me if my piece is a iambic pentameter. If there are any mistakes please let inform me, thank you very much.

    I struggle to improve my state of thoughts.
     
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    P.M me over the piece. I am pretty much the Meter guy on this site.
     
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