Character introduction has always been something I struggled with mildly -and that almighty first page in a story is probably one of the biggest stressors for me. So, if you choose to read the snippet from the quote box below, I have a couple questions. 1) Does this make you want to read further? 2) Is this character relatable at all? Or if they are not is there intrigue towards making a connection? 3) Does this character feel unnecessarily harsh and disrespectful toward the dead given the situation? My intent with this is to give light to a character who obviously has had to deal with some extremely traumatic stuff on a daily basis to make her brush off a body (a gory one at that) so casually. However, I also don't want her to come off as completely cold and unfeeling, which might turn a potential reader away. Does this snippet pull off all these things? What may I want to look out for in the future as I continue to write her story, since this character starts out as a tough baddass that gets cracked later on?