I'm still trucking here trying to get published and trying to find an agent. I've been taking my time on query letters as of alte. I actually haven't sent one out in three weeks because I'm afraid I can do better on the letter. I really want to be able to send this a\out, but I'm unsure if I should I've tried getting people to look over it at local colleges. What they mostly did was gffor grammar though and those teachers I don't think even know what a query letter is, actually one did ask me "What is it?". They correct stuff that shouldn't be corrected like they think Attn (Agent's name): should be Dear: instead, but I've gotten some grammar issues settled. I've also posted my query online for others to look at and judge, but I haven't been getting many responses, so I'm unsure if it's really ready yet. I'm trying to decide what should I do right now. I'm thinking I would be hurting myself sending it out than waiting a bit longer to get a little more in depth help and then send it out. If you may need for me to post my query letter here, can I do it in this section or another? I thank all who reply to this thread.