I'm working on a scene in a novel. I have two people who are not identified, in near darkness, and this is about all the reader will hear out of them. The dialog looks like this: "So I took the cat over to the dog and let them at it." Raised eyes. "A little blood, but lots of stupid fun." Teeth gritting. "Okay, it was fun for me." Should I break that up into separate paragraphs, or do you think this is fine? ETA This entire spoken dialog is one speaker. ETA2 The example sentences above are not the actual text in my manuscript. They're just made up for the sake of this query.