Create a poem, each person adds 1 line!

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  1. Halo

    Halo Banned

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    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
    Bleak and desolate in existence
    Filled with the curse of Anarchy
    Condemed with a spirit within

    I walk and wander aimlessly
    doing nothing
    feeling blank and pasty
    Boy isn't that a feeling

    Is life only meant for lingering?
    or is it about finding hot girls and fingering?
    To beat an urgent urging, that does not want to wait
    This feeling I have begun to hate.
    Is the feeling I have begun to create.

    What have I done to deserve this?
    Sensational Feeling.
    That I don't find appealing.
    Which Keeps on Reeling.

    Untill the nights are done.
    Before the morning shall come.
    My feelings are found
    and bound within this Rapture.
    Is where I shall find my desire.
    To meet my fantasies.
    to all my disires
    I endevout to achieve
    all that i deserve.
     
  2. Raven

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    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
    Bleak and desolate in existence
    Filled with the curse of Anarchy
    Condemed with a spirit within

    I walk and wander aimlessly
    doing nothing
    feeling blank and pasty
    Boy isn't that a feeling

    Is life only meant for lingering?
    or is it about finding hot girls and fingering?
    To beat an urgent urging, that does not want to wait
    This feeling I have begun to hate.
    Is the feeling I have begun to create.

    What have I done to deserve this?
    Sensational Feeling.
    That I don't find appealing.
    Which Keeps on Reeling.

    Untill the nights are done.
    Before the morning shall come.
    My feelings are found
    and bound within this Rapture.
    Is where I shall find my desire.
    To meet my fantasies.
    to all my disires
    I endevout to achieve
    all that i deserve.
    Is all that I need
     
  3. Jack The Ripper

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    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
    Bleak and desolate in existence
    Filled with the curse of Anarchy
    Condemed with a spirit within

    I walk and wander aimlessly
    doing nothing
    feeling blank and pasty
    Boy isn't that a feeling

    Is life only meant for lingering?
    or is it about finding hot girls and fingering?
    To beat an urgent urging, that does not want to wait
    This feeling I have begun to hate.
    Is the feeling I have begun to create.

    What have I done to deserve this?
    Sensational Feeling.
    That I don't find appealing.
    Which Keeps on Reeling.

    Untill the nights are done.
    Before the morning shall come.
    My feelings are found
    and bound within this Rapture.
    Is where I shall find my desire.
    To meet my fantasies.
    to all my disires
    I endevout to achieve
    all that i deserve.
    Is all that I need
    Is my will to please
     
  4. Crazy Ivan

    Crazy Ivan New Member

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    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
    Bleak and desolate in existence
    Filled with the curse of Anarchy
    Condemed with a spirit within

    I walk and wander aimlessly
    doing nothing
    feeling blank and pasty
    Boy isn't that a feeling

    Is life only meant for lingering?
    or is it about finding hot girls and fingering?
    To beat an urgent urging, that does not want to wait
    This feeling I have begun to hate.
    Is the feeling I have begun to create.

    What have I done to deserve this?
    Sensational Feeling.
    That I don't find appealing.
    Which Keeps on Reeling.

    Untill the nights are done.
    Before the morning shall come.
    My feelings are found
    and bound within this Rapture.
    Is where I shall find my desire.
    To meet my fantasies.
    to all my disires
    I endevout to achieve
    all that i deserve.
    Is all that I need
    Is my will to please
    Before my will can freeze.
     
  5. Jack The Ripper

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    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
    Bleak and desolate in existence
    Filled with the curse of Anarchy
    Condemed with a spirit within

    I walk and wander aimlessly
    doing nothing
    feeling blank and pasty
    Boy isn't that a feeling

    Is life only meant for lingering?
    or is it about finding hot girls and fingering?
    To beat an urgent urging, that does not want to wait
    This feeling I have begun to hate.
    Is the feeling I have begun to create.

    What have I done to deserve this?
    Sensational Feeling.
    That I don't find appealing.
    Which Keeps on Reeling.

    Untill the nights are done.
    Before the morning shall come.
    My feelings are found
    and bound within this Rapture.
    Is where I shall find my desire.
    To meet my fantasies.
    to all my disires
    I endevout to achieve
    all that i deserve.
    Is all that I need
    Is my will to please
    Before my will can freeze.

    The Sky Is red
     
  6. Raven

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    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
    Bleak and desolate in existence
    Filled with the curse of Anarchy
    Condemed with a spirit within

    I walk and wander aimlessly
    doing nothing
    feeling blank and pasty
    Boy isn't that a feeling

    Is life only meant for lingering?
    or is it about finding hot girls and fingering?
    To beat an urgent urging, that does not want to wait
    This feeling I have begun to hate.
    Is the feeling I have begun to create.

    What have I done to deserve this?
    Sensational Feeling.
    That I don't find appealing.
    Which Keeps on Reeling.

    Untill the nights are done.
    Before the morning shall come.
    My feelings are found
    and bound within this Rapture.
    Is where I shall find my desire.
    To meet my fantasies.
    to all my disires
    I endevout to achieve
    all that i deserve.
    Is all that I need
    Is my will to please
    Before my will can freeze.

    The Sky Is red
    As the Dawn Is Rising
     
  7. ariella

    ariella New Member

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    in a home full of wonderful and loving people I ca
    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
    Bleak and desolate in existence
    Filled with the curse of Anarchy
    Condemed with a spirit within

    I walk and wander aimlessly
    doing nothing
    feeling blank and pasty
    Boy isn't that a feeling

    Is life only meant for lingering?
    or is it about finding hot girls and fingering?
    To beat an urgent urging, that does not want to wait
    This feeling I have begun to hate.
    Is the feeling I have begun to create.

    What have I done to deserve this?
    Sensational Feeling.
    That I don't find appealing.
    Which Keeps on Reeling.

    Untill the nights are done.
    Before the morning shall come.
    My feelings are found
    and bound within this Rapture.
    Is where I shall find my desire.
    To meet my fantasies.
    to all my disires
    I endevout to achieve
    all that i deserve.
    Is all that I need
    Is my will to please
    Before my will can freeze.

    The Sky Is red
    As the Dawn Is Rising
    Over the blood been spilled that night
     
  8. Raven

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    Location:
    The NetherWorld
    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
    Bleak and desolate in existence
    Filled with the curse of Anarchy
    Condemed with a spirit within

    I walk and wander aimlessly
    doing nothing
    feeling blank and pasty
    Boy isn't that a feeling

    Is life only meant for lingering?
    or is it about finding hot girls and fingering?
    To beat an urgent urging, that does not want to wait
    This feeling I have begun to hate.
    Is the feeling I have begun to create.

    What have I done to deserve this?
    Sensational Feeling.
    That I don't find appealing.
    Which Keeps on Reeling.

    Untill the nights are done.
    Before the morning shall come.
    My feelings are found
    and bound within this Rapture.
    Is where I shall find my desire.
    To meet my fantasies.
    to all my disires
    I endevout to achieve
    all that i deserve.
    Is all that I need
    Is my will to please
    Before my will can freeze.

    The Sky Is red
    As the Dawn Is Rising
    Over the blood been spilled that night
    A brother weeps not knowing why.
     
  9. ariella

    ariella New Member

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    Location:
    in a home full of wonderful and loving people I ca
    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
    Bleak and desolate in existence
    Filled with the curse of Anarchy
    Condemed with a spirit within

    I walk and wander aimlessly
    doing nothing
    feeling blank and pasty
    Boy isn't that a feeling

    Is life only meant for lingering?
    or is it about finding hot girls and fingering?
    To beat an urgent urging, that does not want to wait
    This feeling I have begun to hate.
    Is the feeling I have begun to create.

    What have I done to deserve this?
    Sensational Feeling.
    That I don't find appealing.
    Which Keeps on Reeling.

    Untill the nights are done.
    Before the morning shall come.
    My feelings are found
    and bound within this Rapture.
    Is where I shall find my desire.
    To meet my fantasies.
    to all my disires
    I endevout to achieve
    all that i deserve.
    Is all that I need
    Is my will to please
    Before my will can freeze.

    The Sky Is red
    As the Dawn Is Rising
    Over the blood been spilled that night
    A brother weeps not knowing why.
    For enemies choose whether to live or die.
     
  10. Raven

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    Location:
    The NetherWorld
    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
    Bleak and desolate in existence
    Filled with the curse of Anarchy
    Condemed with a spirit within

    I walk and wander aimlessly
    doing nothing
    feeling blank and pasty
    Boy isn't that a feeling

    Is life only meant for lingering?
    or is it about finding hot girls and fingering?
    To beat an urgent urging, that does not want to wait
    This feeling I have begun to hate.
    Is the feeling I have begun to create.

    What have I done to deserve this?
    Sensational Feeling.
    That I don't find appealing.
    Which Keeps on Reeling.

    Untill the nights are done.
    Before the morning shall come.
    My feelings are found
    and bound within this Rapture.
    Is where I shall find my desire.
    To meet my fantasies.
    to all my disires
    I endevout to achieve
    all that i deserve.
    Is all that I need
    Is my will to please
    Before my will can freeze.

    The Sky Is red
    As the Dawn Is Rising
    Over the blood been spilled that night
    A brother weeps not knowing why.
    For enemies choose whether to live or die.
    As the night grows old.
    The day begins its youth
     
  11. ariella

    ariella New Member

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    in a home full of wonderful and loving people I ca
    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
    Bleak and desolate in existence
    Filled with the curse of Anarchy
    Condemed with a spirit within

    I walk and wander aimlessly
    doing nothing
    feeling blank and pasty
    Boy isn't that a feeling

    Is life only meant for lingering?
    or is it about finding hot girls and fingering?
    To beat an urgent urging, that does not want to wait
    This feeling I have begun to hate.
    Is the feeling I have begun to create.

    What have I done to deserve this?
    Sensational Feeling.
    That I don't find appealing.
    Which Keeps on Reeling.

    Untill the nights are done.
    Before the morning shall come.
    My feelings are found
    and bound within this Rapture.
    Is where I shall find my desire.
    To meet my fantasies.
    to all my disires
    I endevout to achieve
    all that i deserve.
    Is all that I need
    Is my will to please
    Before my will can freeze.

    The Sky Is red
    As the Dawn Is Rising
    Over the blood been spilled that night
    A brother weeps not knowing why.
    For enemies choose whether to live or die.
    As the night grows old.
    The day begins its youth
    Gentle whispers heard within the breeze
     
  12. Raven

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    Location:
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    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
    Bleak and desolate in existence
    Filled with the curse of Anarchy
    Condemed with a spirit within

    I walk and wander aimlessly
    doing nothing
    feeling blank and pasty
    Boy isn't that a feeling

    Is life only meant for lingering?
    or is it about finding hot girls and fingering?
    To beat an urgent urging, that does not want to wait
    This feeling I have begun to hate.
    Is the feeling I have begun to create.

    What have I done to deserve this?
    Sensational Feeling.
    That I don't find appealing.
    Which Keeps on Reeling.

    Untill the nights are done.
    Before the morning shall come.
    My feelings are found
    and bound within this Rapture.
    Is where I shall find my desire.
    To meet my fantasies.
    to all my disires
    I endevout to achieve
    all that i deserve.
    Is all that I need
    Is my will to please
    Before my will can freeze.

    The Sky Is red
    As the Dawn Is Rising
    Over the blood been spilled that night
    A brother weeps not knowing why.
    For enemies choose whether to live or die.
    As the night grows old.
    The day begins its youth
    Gentle whispers heard within the breeze
    that flows like a leave within the whisp of the wind
     
  13. JenniferEva

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    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
    Bleak and desolate in existence
    Filled with the curse of Anarchy
    Condemed with a spirit within

    I walk and wander aimlessly
    doing nothing
    feeling blank and pasty
    Boy isn't that a feeling

    Is life only meant for lingering?
    or is it about finding hot girls and fingering?
    To beat an urgent urging, that does not want to wait
    This feeling I have begun to hate.
    Is the feeling I have begun to create.

    What have I done to deserve this?
    Sensational Feeling.
    That I don't find appealing.
    Which Keeps on Reeling.

    Untill the nights are done.
    Before the morning shall come.
    My feelings are found
    and bound within this Rapture.
    Is where I shall find my desire.
    To meet my fantasies.
    to all my disires
    I endevout to achieve
    all that i deserve.
    Is all that I need
    Is my will to please
    Before my will can freeze.

    The Sky Is red
    As the Dawn Is Rising
    Over the blood been spilled that night
    A brother weeps not knowing why.
    For enemies choose whether to live or die.
    As the night grows old.
    The day begins its youth
    Gentle whispers heard within the breeze
    that flows like a leave within the whisp of the wind
    controlling the day, struggle to escape
     
  14. ItalianStallion

    ItalianStallion New Member

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    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
    Bleak and desolate in existence
    Filled with the curse of Anarchy
    Condemed with a spirit within

    I walk and wander aimlessly
    doing nothing
    feeling blank and pasty
    Boy isn't that a feeling

    Is life only meant for lingering?
    or is it about finding hot girls and fingering?
    To beat an urgent urging, that does not want to wait
    This feeling I have begun to hate.
    Is the feeling I have begun to create.

    What have I done to deserve this?
    Sensational Feeling.
    That I don't find appealing.
    Which Keeps on Reeling.

    Untill the nights are done.
    Before the morning shall come.
    My feelings are found
    and bound within this Rapture.
    Is where I shall find my desire.
    To meet my fantasies.
    to all my disires
    I endevout to achieve
    all that i deserve.
    Is all that I need
    Is my will to please
    Before my will can freeze.

    The Sky Is red
    As the Dawn Is Rising
    Over the blood been spilled that night
    A brother weeps not knowing why.
    For enemies choose whether to live or die.
    As the night grows old.
    The day begins its youth
    Gentle whispers heard within the breeze
    that flows like a leave within the whisp of the wind
    controlling the day, struggle to escape
    Sometimes I don't know whether i'm dead or awake
     
  15. ariella

    ariella New Member

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    in a home full of wonderful and loving people I ca
    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
    Bleak and desolate in existence
    Filled with the curse of Anarchy
    Condemed with a spirit within

    I walk and wander aimlessly
    doing nothing
    feeling blank and pasty
    Boy isn't that a feeling

    Is life only meant for lingering?
    or is it about finding hot girls and fingering?
    To beat an urgent urging, that does not want to wait
    This feeling I have begun to hate.
    Is the feeling I have begun to create.

    What have I done to deserve this?
    Sensational Feeling.
    That I don't find appealing.
    Which Keeps on Reeling.

    Untill the nights are done.
    Before the morning shall come.
    My feelings are found
    and bound within this Rapture.
    Is where I shall find my desire.
    To meet my fantasies.
    to all my disires
    I endevout to achieve
    all that i deserve.
    Is all that I need
    Is my will to please
    Before my will can freeze.

    The Sky Is red
    As the Dawn Is Rising
    Over the blood been spilled that night
    A brother weeps not knowing why.
    For enemies choose whether to live or die.
    As the night grows old.
    The day begins its youth
    Gentle whispers heard within the breeze
    that flows like a leave within the whisp of the wind
    controlling the day, struggle to escape
    Sometimes I don't know whether i'm dead or awake
    And I am soon consumed by the thought
     
  16. Myst

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    Location:
    The streets of the sky
    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
    Bleak and desolate in existence
    Filled with the curse of Anarchy
    Condemed with a spirit within

    I walk and wander aimlessly
    doing nothing
    feeling blank and pasty
    Boy isn't that a feeling

    Is life only meant for lingering?
    or is it about finding hot girls and fingering?
    To beat an urgent urging, that does not want to wait
    This feeling I have begun to hate.
    Is the feeling I have begun to create.

    What have I done to deserve this?
    Sensational Feeling.
    That I don't find appealing.
    Which Keeps on Reeling.

    Untill the nights are done.
    Before the morning shall come.
    My feelings are found
    and bound within this Rapture.
    Is where I shall find my desire.
    To meet my fantasies.
    to all my disires
    I endevout to achieve
    all that i deserve.
    Is all that I need
    Is my will to please
    Before my will can freeze.

    The Sky Is red
    As the Dawn Is Rising
    Over the blood been spilled that night
    A brother weeps not knowing why.
    For enemies choose whether to live or die.
    As the night grows old.
    The day begins its youth
    Gentle whispers heard within the breeze
    that flows like a leave within the whisp of the wind
    controlling the day, struggle to escape
    Sometimes I don't know whether i'm dead or awake
    And I am soon consumed by the thought
    of midsummer skirmishes fought and lost.
     
  17. JenniferEva

    JenniferEva Member

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    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
    Bleak and desolate in existence
    Filled with the curse of Anarchy
    Condemed with a spirit within

    I walk and wander aimlessly
    doing nothing
    feeling blank and pasty
    Boy isn't that a feeling

    Is life only meant for lingering?
    or is it about finding hot girls and fingering?
    To beat an urgent urging, that does not want to wait
    This feeling I have begun to hate.
    Is the feeling I have begun to create.

    What have I done to deserve this?
    Sensational Feeling.
    That I don't find appealing.
    Which Keeps on Reeling.

    Untill the nights are done.
    Before the morning shall come.
    My feelings are found
    and bound within this Rapture.
    Is where I shall find my desire.
    To meet my fantasies.
    to all my disires
    I endevout to achieve
    all that i deserve.
    Is all that I need
    Is my will to please
    Before my will can freeze.

    The Sky Is red
    As the Dawn Is Rising
    Over the blood been spilled that night
    A brother weeps not knowing why.
    For enemies choose whether to live or die.
    As the night grows old.
    The day begins its youth
    Gentle whispers heard within the breeze
    that flows like a leave within the whisp of the wind
    controlling the day, struggle to escape
    Sometimes I don't know whether i'm dead or awake
    And I am soon consumed by the thought
    of midsummer skirmishes fought and lost.

    Looking back on the day it all began
     
  18. Myst

    Myst Active Member

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    Location:
    The streets of the sky
    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
    Bleak and desolate in existence
    Filled with the curse of Anarchy
    Condemed with a spirit within

    I walk and wander aimlessly
    doing nothing
    feeling blank and pasty
    Boy isn't that a feeling

    Is life only meant for lingering?
    or is it about finding hot girls and fingering?
    To beat an urgent urging, that does not want to wait
    This feeling I have begun to hate.
    Is the feeling I have begun to create.

    What have I done to deserve this?
    Sensational Feeling.
    That I don't find appealing.
    Which Keeps on Reeling.

    Untill the nights are done.
    Before the morning shall come.
    My feelings are found
    and bound within this Rapture.
    Is where I shall find my desire.
    To meet my fantasies.
    to all my disires
    I endevout to achieve
    all that i deserve.
    Is all that I need
    Is my will to please
    Before my will can freeze.

    The Sky Is red
    As the Dawn Is Rising
    Over the blood been spilled that night
    A brother weeps not knowing why.
    For enemies choose whether to live or die.
    As the night grows old.
    The day begins its youth
    Gentle whispers heard within the breeze
    that flows like a leave within the whisp of the wind
    controlling the day, struggle to escape
    Sometimes I don't know whether i'm dead or awake
    And I am soon consumed by the thought
    of midsummer skirmishes fought and lost.

    Looking back on the day it all began
    My comrades crying their revolution
     
  19. Tyrant Cecelia

    Tyrant Cecelia New Member

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    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
    Bleak and desolate in existence
    Filled with the curse of Anarchy
    Condemed with a spirit within

    I walk and wander aimlessly
    doing nothing
    feeling blank and pasty
    Boy isn't that a feeling

    Is life only meant for lingering?
    or is it about finding hot girls and fingering?
    To beat an urgent urging, that does not want to wait
    This feeling I have begun to hate.
    Is the feeling I have begun to create.

    What have I done to deserve this?
    Sensational Feeling.
    That I don't find appealing.
    Which Keeps on Reeling.

    Untill the nights are done.
    Before the morning shall come.
    My feelings are found
    and bound within this Rapture.
    Is where I shall find my desire.
    To meet my fantasies.
    to all my disires
    I endevout to achieve
    all that i deserve.
    Is all that I need
    Is my will to please
    Before my will can freeze.

    The Sky Is red
    As the Dawn Is Rising
    Over the blood been spilled that night
    A brother weeps not knowing why.
    For enemies choose whether to live or die.
    As the night grows old.
    The day begins its youth
    Gentle whispers heard within the breeze
    that flows like a leave within the whisp of the wind
    controlling the day, struggle to escape
    Sometimes I don't know whether i'm dead or awake
    And I am soon consumed by the thought
    of midsummer skirmishes fought and lost.

    Looking back on the day it all began
    My comrades crying their revolution
    On the sands of time
     
  20. Myst

    Myst Active Member

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    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
    Bleak and desolate in existence
    Filled with the curse of Anarchy
    Condemed with a spirit within

    I walk and wander aimlessly
    doing nothing
    feeling blank and pasty
    Boy isn't that a feeling

    Is life only meant for lingering?
    or is it about finding hot girls and fingering?
    To beat an urgent urging, that does not want to wait
    This feeling I have begun to hate.
    Is the feeling I have begun to create.

    What have I done to deserve this?
    Sensational Feeling.
    That I don't find appealing.
    Which Keeps on Reeling.

    Untill the nights are done.
    Before the morning shall come.
    My feelings are found
    and bound within this Rapture.
    Is where I shall find my desire.
    To meet my fantasies.
    to all my disires
    I endevout to achieve
    all that i deserve.
    Is all that I need
    Is my will to please
    Before my will can freeze.

    The Sky Is red
    As the Dawn Is Rising
    Over the blood been spilled that night
    A brother weeps not knowing why.
    For enemies choose whether to live or die.
    As the night grows old.
    The day begins its youth
    Gentle whispers heard within the breeze
    that flows like a leave within the whisp of the wind
    controlling the day, struggle to escape
    Sometimes I don't know whether i'm dead or awake
    And I am soon consumed by the thought
    of midsummer skirmishes fought and lost.

    Looking back on the day it all began
    My comrades crying their revolution
    On the sands of time
    I sowed in these fields my reputation.


    (( Why don't we end the poem here? It's getting too long. ))
     
  21. Crazy Ivan

    Crazy Ivan New Member

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    EDIT: Sorry, problems.
     
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    ((Alright...)

    A summer afternoon can kill.
     
  23. Myst

    Myst Active Member

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    Location:
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    A summer afternoon can kill.
    with unsheathed shafts of molten light
    lanced towards the hills.


    ( I get to add two lines cause' I'm special.)
     
  24. Gannon

    Gannon Contributor Contributor

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    A summer afternoon can kill.
    with unsheathed shafts of molten light
    lanced towards the hills.
    And could capriciously, just as easily, not.
     
  25. Myst

    Myst Active Member

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    Location:
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    A summer afternoon can kill.
    with unsheathed shafts of molten light
    lanced towards the hills.
    And could capriciously, just as easily, not.
    But rather, scent the morning by leaf's dew.
     

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