i am attempting to write a story but i am not sure if my background fiction is solid, would appreciate any ideas or constructive criticism, be warned though, this is a two page history for the current story, here it goes: History 800 years ago shortly after the present day, as overpopulation and unrest mounted on Earth, a number of new political organizations were formed, including the Ascendant and the Dominion cult, who later became bitter rivals. These organizations lead the race to humanity's discovery of terraformation, by funding and encouraging technological progression in this field. In the end Russia was the first to discover it, under the auspices and funding of the Ascendant. The new technology was launched into the space, with the terraforming gear aboard, to spearhead the colonization of new worlds, under the command of the Ascendant organization, who funded the project. The launching of the vessels sparked the first wave of human expansion beyond the confines of Earth, founding the first colonies on Mars, the Moon, Venus, and Mercury. In later years they terraformed planet and moons, and expanded their civilization beyond Earth and throughout much of the solar system. Many worlds were colonized thanks to the development of transformation, the discovery, had ignited a prosperous time of technology and exploration for Humans, known as the Expanse. During the expansion however the discovery of mysterious and ancient technology in the asteroid belt, proved to be our ultimate downfall. Tensions between the colonies were initially due to the race for the valuable technology in the asteroid belt. As colonies became distrustful of each others growing power, tensions escalated between them, and it lead to civil war. During the war however, accidental reactivation of an alien artifact known as the Black Stone resulted in the arrival of an alien robot race known as the Perverted. Who waged a campaign of destruction against our civilization nearly driving us to extinction. The archive where humans had kept their research and knowledge from the Expanse, was lost. History 2 The Expanse had lasted for less than two centuries, before human civilization, fell victim to an event of cataclysmic proportions. The technology that had been acquired from the asteroid belt had been the cause for the civil war as each colony strove for control over it. However after the Martian colony had accidentally activated a device from the belt during the war, resulting in Perverted appearing on Jupiter from an unknown location by way of a warp gate that allowed them to instantly enter our solar system. This alien species waged a campaign of destruction against civilization. Few managed to survive the onslaught. Forced to withdraw to Earth, mankind's home world, the remnants of humanity who survived united under the guidance of the Ascendant, who were still present on the planet, to build the Haven, establishing the last bastion of civilization in the solar system. The Ascendant also established a protective shield over the city using old human technology, temporarily shielding them from the enemies who loomed in the skies. ( eventually the Perverted seeded parts of Earth and had begun to encroach on the haven, sending raids in an attempt to find a weakness in the Haven's defenses.) The Haven has come under attack throughout the years, Perverted raids probing its defenses for weaknesses. You are one of an army of warriors known as Defenders that call the Haven home, individuals that have been created to take a stand to reclaim what we lost. though the enemy may posses superior technology and numbers proving decisive advantages, you posses the weapons and secrets to turn the tide of battle in humanity's favor. well what do you guys think, also i am an amateur, so please don't get me wrong i'm not trying to get someone to do my work, just need your guys professional and experienced views and ideas, thanks!