Darkest character work you've ever written

Discussion in 'Character Development' started by Simpson17866, Oct 26, 2013.

  1. erebh

    erebh Banned Contributor

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    I have a necrophyliac necromancer who pulls arms off babies...
     
  2. DeathandGrim

    DeathandGrim Senior Member

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    ...THE FUCK?
     
  3. Wild Knight

    Wild Knight Senior Member

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    And in spite of my attempts, I feel a world of mine growing darker. NOOOOO!!!
     
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    erebh Banned Contributor

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    What? Not dark enough for you? :D I'd have thought with your moniker you'd love this guy...
     
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  5. Wild Knight

    Wild Knight Senior Member

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    It's dark enough for me. I'd try and top it, but then that would result in gratuitous violence, so... this domain for dark works is all yours.
     
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    DeathandGrim Senior Member

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    I think I may need to travel to the light side and retire after that
     
  7. minstrel

    minstrel Leader of the Insquirrelgency Supporter Contributor

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    I have a character who's an eleven-year-old boy in a pre-technological world (a horse-drawn wagon is as advanced as it gets in this world). He and his father have walked hundreds of miles from their home to trade with a distant city-state, and the father dies, accidentally, trying to save the boy during a natural disaster. They come from a simple society with a very strong tradition of honoring the dead, but the boy doesn't know his society's rituals yet (he's too young to have participated), so he feels responsible, but he doesn't know what to do. The fact that he can't bury his father properly torments him with guilt, over and above the loss he feels.

    I know it's not as cruel and badass as some of the stuff you guys have done to your characters, but it's damn hard on this kid.
     
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  8. HarleyQ.

    HarleyQ. Just a Little Pit Bull (female)

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    The psychologically dark stuff is my favorite. What you've done to this character is very dark, make no mistake.
     

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