What are your thoughts on this? Do you think a kind of sullen/depressive character turns readers off, especially when told from an extremely close first person/present POV? I ask because I'm noticing my MC is just so sullen all the time. Like where I am, she's got a huge crush on this girl, and the other girl likes her back, but she won't just accept it and let herself fall in love. Instead, she's been just kind of moping around "she deserves someone better than me, I'm no good, etc.." I dunno, she just doesn't seem to be "developing" any. Ever since Ch. 1 she's been in this sullen, moody rut. From the readers perspective, should I be working harder to bring her out of this personality, or just let her stay moody all the way to the end?