I'm banging away on the keys tonight and I suddenly ran into an issue with dialogue. Here's the situation I'm faced with. Let me run an example then I'll pose my question. Example He reached down and picked the map, drawing his finger down the blue interstate line to the small circle that marked the town: Seljar. "This is the place." he said. "This where they took him and....." His hand was shaking now, the map folded under his tightening of his grip. Okay that is the example, it is not an actual piece, but something off the top of my head, but a story I am working on has a structure similar to this. So my question is: Can you drop dialogue into the middle of a paragraph like this if the actions relate to the dialogue. Thoughts?