“I need you to go to my friend’s house.” There was a pleasant note in her voice. “To get my medicine.” Above is a sentence in a story I'm working on and I'm wondering about the punctuation. If I changed the character beat to a tag "she said", I would need commas after house and voice. But if I punctuate this like a beat (as is), with periods ending the dialogue, then the spoken sentence is not grammatically correct without the interrupting narration. I guess my round-about question is whether or not this sentence is punctuated correctly Thanks.