So, I've noticed that in my writing, I like putting dialogue tags in the middle. Examples: "And this," said Rachel, "Is where I put my all my dead bodies." "What are you saying?" said Joseph. "You need to refrigerate them!" I don't do it all the time, but I probably do it nearly half of the time. What do you think, too much? I just hate it when I'm reading a story, and I don't know who is speaking until the end of a couple sentences, and then I almost have to re-read it and imagine that person speaking. Or, if I already know who is speaking, but the tag says they are speaking sarcastically or whatever, and then I have to re-read it and think of it being sarcastic. I guess I don't necessarily have that frustration now, but I remember having it when I was younger, and I'm trying to write a middle-grade book.