Dirac Arc Part One - The main character in Lola. - She is friends with Christopher and Calvin. - She is also friends with Kerry, Gina , Mikey , Valerie, Meghan, and Logan. As well as Tiffany. - They attend high school together. - Lola is in love with Calvin, Gina and Kerry are best friends, Meghan and Logan go out , and Mikey has a crush on Valerie. Tiffany is in love with Calvin as well. - Logan is Christopher's and Calvin's rivals. - Valerie hates Meghan and loves Lola. - Lola was meeting up with Christopher and Meghan to go with the others to a spring break trip. - They wanted to go to Miami and they finally did. - They check into a hotel and settle down. - They enjoy their lavish lifestyle, even doing some scandalous stuff. -They go to sleep and wake up in a mysterious world. In was in outer space with very bright lights. - Then they land on a realm with beings called voyager. The realm is apart of the afterlife and any beings with the world are immortal. The voyagers are able to travel to different universes and are able to manipulate, destroy, and create new universes. - The realm is called the Arc. The beings are able to access infinite sea of particles through the Dirac Sea to manipulate and create universes. Voyagers are created from this same exact Arc/ Sea. - The humans aka main cast are only able to access the Arc through subconscious thoughts but are not aware of them consciously. This realm is separate from the real world because it similar to a higher reality that looks at the lower realms such as Earth universe. This means that influences from the Arc cannot effect the existence of lower universes like Earth. - The Arc is like an archive and the universe like Earth universe in which the main characters live in are the collection of documentation. - They meet a voyager that goes by the name Noah and learn that he is the one that sent them to the Arc. - Noah says that he wants to play a game with his sister, Natalie, with him being the villain. - Natalie explains to them that they will be murdered by someone in the conscious universe ( Earth' s universe) and that she want to help them. They have to play a game of Mafia with Noah being the Moderator. The game: Select a Moderator This should be someone who knows the rules and has played the game before if possible. Choose Players The Moderator divides the deck of cards as follows: A king – the Detective A queen – the Doctor Cards of one suit (such as hearts) for Mafia members – one for every three Innocents Miscellaneous cards (no hearts) for the Innocents The Moderator may either assign additional roles or have players draw cards designated as being for a particular part, i.e. Jack of Spades for the Magician. Shuffle and Deal the Cards The Moderator shuffles the cards and then deals them out so that each person has a card. Players are not to show their cards to anyone else. Time to “Sleep” The Moderator begins the night cycle by having all players close their eyes and put down their heads. After everyone is “asleep,” the Moderator instructs the Mafia to wake up and choose a victim. At this time, the Mafia members will be able to see all their fellow members. They pick a victim by gesturing silently. Players may gently tap their fingers to disguise any noise made. They tell the Moderator their decision by pointing to him or her. Then the Mafia “sleeps” again until “morning.” Awaken the Detective While everyone else is still asleep, the Moderator wakes up the Detective, who points to someone they suspect is a member of the Mafia. If the Detective is correct, that Mafia member is eliminated from the game. If not, the Detective now knows the identity of an innocent. The Detective then goes back to “sleep.” Awaken the Doctor Next, the Moderator wakes up the Doctor who will choose a person to save by silent pointing. The Doctor can choose to save himself and thus survive the night. If the Doctor chooses another player and that individual is chosen by the Mafia to be killed, nothing will happen to the victim – they are “saved.” If the Doctor is chosen for death by the Mafia, he is out of the game and the townspeople can no longer be saved. Time to Awaken The Moderator tells the players to open their eyes and then announces who “died” the previous night. Hold Discussions The players discuss recent events. Players do not show their cards, but try to convince others they have a certain role. If the discussion reaches a point where a player has a suspicion, the game moves on to the accusation. Make an Accusation Whoever has a suspicion may accuse another player of being a member of the Mafia. This accusation must be seconded by another player. Additionally, the accuser must explain the reason behind the accusation. Other players may then tell if they believe the accusation is just. Defend the Accused Any player who feels the accusation is unjust may choose to defend the accused. If desired, this can be done as a trial, with the accused presenting a fictional alibi and even accusing other players. In some versions of the game, the defense if conducted by a player designated as the Lawyer. The Vote The Moderator calls for a vote and players indicate whether they believe the accused is guilty or not. It may be required that the vote be anonymous or not. The Verdict If it is not decided that the accused is not guilty, accusations begin again. Again there is a defense and vote. This continues until a player is declared guilty and leaves the game. If the majority voted the initial accused player guilty, the night round begins again. Although the only roles that are absolutely necessary are that of the Moderator and the Mafia, others can be added. The number of roles assigned is dependent on the desire of the group and the number of players. The Mafia These players determine who will be killed. They also know the identities of their teammates. The Innocents Also known as the “townspeople,” these players only know the number of Mafiosi in the game. There are fewer Innocents than Mafia members. The Moderator This individual plays an extremely important and significant role in the game. They may choose player roles, create stories about how victims were killed, and moderate the game play, making sure rules are followed. The Detective – an Innocent who learns the team of one player every night The Doctor – an Innocent may protect a player or him/herself from being killed each night The Barman – a Mafia member who may cancel the effect of another player’s ability every night The Vigilante – an Innocent who may kill a player every night The Magician – on the side of the Innocents; can choose to kill one person who they suspect is Mafia each night or can save one person from being lynched by signaling to the Moderator; can do each of things only once The Lycan – an Innocent or a Mafioso; appear to be Mafia during the night; this role helps the Mafia; if killed, they are revealed to be a Mafia member. The Peeping-Tom – allowed to open their eyes at any moment; knows who is who in the game; very likely to be killed for this knowledge The Grandma with a Shotgun – an innocent who visits during the night and kills any player they wish; if investigated by the Detective, they die, but if the Mafia attempts to kill her, a random Mafia is killed; cannot be killed by the Mafia; no one knows if deaths are caused by her or another player Cupid and the Lovers – Cupid is on the innocent team and picks two people to be the Lovers the first night, one of whom dies immediately; the other dies of a broken heart. Alternatively, the Lovers can be awakened by the Moderator during the first night and told of their roles. If one is a victim, the other dies also. The Informant – gets to know who the Mafia is but their identity remains unknown. During the first night cycle, the Moderator lets the Informant see who the Mafia members. The Mafia members keep their eyes closed and raise their hands. The Informant helps the Innocents, but need to do so secretively or is likely to be killed. The Armor – this player cannot be killed by Mafia and only be voted off The Bandit – has not voting power; knows who the Mafia is; works to aid the Mafia The Lawyer – chooses someone to defend; that person cannot be voted out the following morning Rambo – able to throw a “grenade” at someone and kill that person and the two people sitting on either side The Bus Driver – can blindly change two player’s roles The Other (Alien) – Looks like an innocent. Awakens after the Doctor and Mafia have finished their parts. If the Alien is picked for killing, the Moderator advises the Other secretly. At this point, the Other attempts to be hung. If successful, the Other stays in the game (or wins). If hung before activation, the other is out of the game. If the Innocent wins then the game will end and a universe in which the characters do not die will happen. But If they lose, then the game will continue. As an effect of the game, the characters within that are taken out of the game within the higher realm, then the universe with them living in it will be destroyed and a new one will be created in which that person is dead. Dead in the Game = Dead in Real Life The character gradually start acting psychotic as a result of the game and their real life existence are acting more strange. - So they begin the game with the audience knowing that Lola is the detective and Noah as the moderator. - Night cycle starts and find out that Valerie is also a detective. - The two meet the quantumaniac detective Hercule Clouseau Spade. Quantumaniacs are beings created by voyagers that cannot really exist in the real world but only in the Arc. - The two decided that they though Logan was a Mafia member but he was not. - The others are not aware of this decision and they are all gather together again. - Noah turns Mikey into crystal and says he has been eliminated from the game( Idk I could not come up with anything better). Thus he will die in real life. - Now they must hold a trial where the remaining members are sent to a world that is inhabitant by a giant, mutated spider that consumes them. The last one standing will be able to choose a person to be executed. - The last survivor is Calvin who decides that Logan is a Mafia member. - Now the two must exchange in a dual that consist of them fighting with swords. Calvin wins after stabbing Logan in the chest causing him to become executed and removal from the game. He was also turn into crystal. Meghan was a mental breakdown and just as she is about to reveal her role, Noah stabs her with a sword. This caused her to turn in to crystal to be removed from the game. - Then Lola wakes up in the real world in the hotel where she meets the remaining cast members Valerie, Gina, Kerry, Christopher, Tiffany, and Calvin. They go into Logan and Meghan rooms and they found their bodies dead. - Everyone begins to freak out. In the Arc, the others cry as they witnesses the death of their friends. - The police shows up to their hotel and tells them that Mikey has been found dead in a nearby alley. - They all decided to go home but found out that they plane has been in a tragic crashed. Noah explains to them that because of Mikeys death, this caused the plane to crash as a result of it.
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