Script writing Guru Robert Mackee tells us that if one can keep a reader enthralled by a step outline(your story told in bullet points) than you have a great story. I have been writing a script since last october that I just finished now. I had this idea for about 2 years. So with out further ado my step outline. A boy in his final year goes against his teacher in order to extract revenge. The boy's ex was involved in a affair in with the teacher and is dead. The boy thinks the teacher is some how responsible. He decides to kill the teacher but finds out he can't. The boy was a soldier but his past hunts him to such an extent that he can't come to terms with killing the teacher. Haunted by his own demons he decides to take his own life. The attempted suicide attempt fails and he ends up in hospital. His family is in Israel so they only that he was in a car crash.Yes the story takes place in the states. In the hospital he meets a girl who is an orphan. She has survived cancer and in her the boy confides. She gives him hope to live. Though as a joke she says it's better to kill the teacher then to kill yourself the boy takes her advice and goes back to finish his final year. One day The teacher is giving a lecture to a big audience. Over there the boy tries to make the teacher look bad. Though moderately successful the teacher does miss an important meeting due to the argument. The very next day the teacher conducts a surprise quiz. The boy comes to the class late and isn't allowed to sit for it. Mad at the teacher the boy goes and vandalises the teachers car by placing tooth picks in the door locks so that the car key wont go in. The next day the teacher invites so called forensic specialists to take the finger prints. It's all a set up by the teacher but the boy happily agrees as he never touched the car. Not wanting to be outsmarted the teacher agrees to compensate for the lost quiz marks if the boy will do an make up assignment. The only catch is that it's virtually impossible to do in the given time. But unknown to the teacher the boy has already read half the book on the assignment. He teams up with his friend Thomas and submits the assignment in the next class. The teacher doesn't accept it saying that he makes the rules and what he says goes. The boy again pushed to the edge decides to kill the teacher tonight no matter what. You so far with me?