Hi everyone! I'm so exicted to become part of this wonderful online community. I'd really appreciate it if anyone could give me some feedback on this query letter. You may be totally honest! In fact, please be! Thanks in advance, now here it goes: Dear Agent x, Society collapsed. All that is left of it is debris, a threatening fog that covers most of the sky, and buildings on the brink of falling apart. One of the few cities left standing renders its habitants with only three choices: they can either live on the streets with limited resources, spend their childhoods inside a secluded orphanage, or join the criminals that stain the pavement with blood on a daily basis. Elijah goes through all of it. His time at the orphanage ends abruptly; he finds friendship on the streets, and then loses it due to a hasty decision that changes his life forever. Everything he gains he soon loses, and the more he finds out about how society met such an end, the more humanity terrifies him. The voices inside his head seem to prove him right each day--he is only capable of doing harm. HUMAN NATURE is a dystopian novel completed at 104,030 words. It targets an adult audience and reflects about our society and the future it is likely to meet. The full manuscript is available upon request. It has come to my attention that agents are looking for stories about people of color, written by people of color. My protagonist is a person of color, and I’m proudly Mexican. Thank you so much for your time and consideration.