I've been reading the stories and then comments/edits about the stories. Some entries appear to be "how I would write it." I don't understand how that would be helping me to improve my writing. I'm not talking about errors, needed clarity, and such. I'm talking about my style or approach to writing my "story." I don't care how another would write my story or even write one of my sentences. I do care for helping me to clarify/improve my story or correct my sentences. I can not write as others write. Nor can others write as I write. We are unique. Enough said.