Hello, I have the scene and sequel thing down fairly well, however, I am struggling with the emotion section of them. I can only say my guts twisted, her eyes flaired, my heart pounded in my chest so many times. I am running out of ways to express emotions without falling into the trap of telling over showing. Also, can anyone tell me what qualifies as an emotion in a scene and sequel? I know the physical type I used in my example but are there other types that I might not be aware of--descriptive, but not like the ones above? Are there any tricks to this, or a list out there somewhere? Thanks for your time in advance.