I am not a writer but I am trying to write a sci-fi book because...I never enjoyed writing more in my life! xD I don't like writing on my own language because for it to sound good it has to be written poetry-like and I stink at that. I joined this forum to learn more about writing and I will probably need your help often as I keeg getting stuck in some sentences. For example: ...more energy than one could absorb at a time... It's just a fragment and I think you know what I am trying here, but I am stuck with the tenses. Is it could absorb or could have absorbed or? Warning: this probably won't be my last question, sorry guys and thank you. '