I notice a lot (dare I say inordinate amount) of attention/description being paid to character's eyes in the writing I see here. I am curious about how others feel. I am referring both to the description of the MC's eyes, as well as to the description of the eyes of surrounding characters. In real life, is that really the first thing you notice, someone's eyes? Personally, it doesn't work for me, but I admit I might be in the minority here. Just wondering.