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    Mcat64 New Member

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    Fantasy Manor Burning

    Discussion in 'Fantasy' started by Mcat64, Jan 13, 2019 at 1:37 AM.

    I am describing a fantasy world where there are different houses. One of them is being attacked and the head of the house is realizing that there is a fire. It is engulfing the west wing of the house and she can hear the attakers men downstairs. I have the perfect picture but i cant fifure out how to start it.
     
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    Give us more to work with here. You don't know how to start the description? The fire? This particular section of the story? Why is us knowing the fire is engulfing the west wing important? Who are the attackers? Why are they burning the house while she's in it? The more specific the issue, the better the feedback will be.
     
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    She opens her eyes and there is a burning man standing at the end of the bed, and he is holding a knife.
     
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