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    Razvi New Member

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    Feedback for my writing

    Discussion in 'Short Stories' started by Razvi, Jan 11, 2019 at 7:32 PM.

    Hello,

    Lately, I've been working on a short story I planned to write for a while. I gave it to some of my friends to read it so I can get some feedback, but I figured out that I need more feedback so I know how to write properly and how to write a story the people will love.

    My story, at this time, is around 11000 words and it's about a girl, her name is Camille, who runs away from home because of her abusive father. She meets Amira and then the girls embark on a journey together because Amira accepted to help Camille hide from her father.

    If anyone here wants to take a look at my writing, I'm more than happy to send it to the persons willing to give me some tips on how to improve my writing :) Thank you :love:
     
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