First off: - English is not my native language. I am really trying the best I can, but please correct me on typos. - Genre: Fantasy ~person-to-another-world Well, this is my first message and i'm very scared of what's coming next. Yesterday I started rewriting an old story that I liked, but it had a lack of structure. In the new one, I want to focus more on that and other stable storyline ideas. The book I was starting with was already put away for a year and I am very happy to finally start rewriting it. 1 thing I hope for is stability. I need structure, cause that's the reason I stopped with my last try. (was at 50k words) Chapter 1: So here goes. Yesterday the first chapter was being completely rewritten. The original one had a more of a slice of life scene that I started to dislike. This one starts off with a depressed father who has lost his wife in a car accident and blames his son for being with her at that moment. The son gets beaten and tries to flee the house as much as possible. Now I'm trying to make the bridge to the parallel world, this too, from scratch to fit in.