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  1. Banzai

    Banzai One-time Mod, but on the road to recovery Contributor

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    Gannon- Weekly Poetry Contest (99) Winner

    Discussion in 'Bi-Weekly Poetry Contest Archives' started by Banzai, Nov 6, 2009.

    Autumn Discontent
    By Gannon


    A forest of leaves,
    unlocked and free to scatter
    like gossip adrift.





    (Cry your pardon for the delay in posting this
    -Banzai)
     
  2. freethinker09

    freethinker09 New Member

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    I have to say I really love the imagery that it creates. I can picture the leaves and then tying that gossip makes me sort of realize how bad it can get, you know?

    I like this. =D
     
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    Oasis Writer Contributing Member Contributor

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    Worth the win; this is an amazingly awesome haiku.
     
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