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    Good books written in first person present tense

    Discussion in 'Discussion of Published Works' started by html-dragons, Nov 18, 2017.

    I'm writing a visual novel and the standard for visual novels seems to be first person present tense, but I haven't read much of it. Do you guys have any recommendations of books which use first person present tense really effectively?
     
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    Thank you! I'll check that out.
     
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    JANE EYRE by Charlotte Bronte. It's Gothic and really good and I think it has the vibe you're going for.
     
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    Jane Eyre isn't in present tense and isn't a visual novel, so this is an interesting recommendation. :D

    The Hunger Games trilogy is first-person present-tense.
     
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    I was wondering. I never got around to reading it, but it didn't seem likely.
     
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    You mean “I am wondering” ;)
     
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    First person present tense is super common in YA, so I could throw some YA recs at you. But I'm wondering why you aren't just reading more visual novels?
     
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    It's a slow start (typical Victorian novel) but well worth it. One of my favourite classics.
     
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    I'm fairly certain that Fight Club and American Psycho both use first person present tense (mostly) and I think they use it very effectively for the stories being told.
     
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    I think the Odd Thomas series from Dean Koontz was pretty well done. It's not a visual novel, of course, but I think it is first person present.
     
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    I quibble: A quick look in Amazon's "Look inside!" for the first one suggests that they're first person past, but it's a recent past for the narrator, so he occasionally describes his reality in the present tense.
     
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    That may have been a bit of backstory, it’s a standard ‘as it happens-this leads to that-hero’s journey’ story line.
     
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    Oops! Never mind. I already mentioned it.
     
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