Hello all, my name is Dave if you hadn't guessed. I'm 26 and live in St Helens, near Liverpool. I started writing a short story straight off the top of my head. I soon got to page 30 in size 10 font and realized it probably didn't class as a short story anymore. I'm here to get some critique on my work and hopefully to improve a lot. I couldn't read or write until very late in my life so am probably considerably behind most on my written skills. I hope to make up for this with my massively over active imagination. Anyway, nice to meet you all.