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Didren learns that he is the heir to the Aincaad Empire, instead he gives the crown to Hayben. Why?

  1. He feels responsible for the deaths of Hydrad, Gedrell, and Aldon. Doesnt want anyone else to die

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  2. He knows Hayben is a natural leader, better then he is. He wants to leave the empire in good hands

    100.0%
  3. Hayben knows the people of the land better then he does. He understands the good side of humanity.

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  4. His troubled life full of hate, regret, and loneliness makes him feel unfit to rule.

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  1. ToxicDeadlyMP

    ToxicDeadlyMP New Member

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    Hello everyone

    Discussion in 'New Member Introductions' started by ToxicDeadlyMP, Feb 9, 2017.

    My name is Elias, Student from Rocky Mountain College or Art and Design majoring in video game design, Colorado Native.
    I've been slowly working on a book for several years now, and its time to get things rolling. I have a lot things things done, including setting up a giant timeline map of the first book in my living room. I need assistance filling in the gaps of the story to make it more interesting and complex, which is why I'm here. I've spent such a long time creating and perfecting this world that I'm genuinely worried of someone taking my ideas, that's my biggest fear.

    Ill be posting in the forums for character development/plots help in order to fill in the gaps of the timeline to get the story written. Feel free to send me a message about the story/book, I'd be happy to answer.

    My profile picture is a 3D model I created of the Myrtle Titan

    Here's a short look intro to my story.

    Shouts break the silence across the scorched land as the battle wages on, the ground shakes, tearing down ancient remnants from the last great war. The ground starts to shatter on the southwest plains, as the ground gives way to the immense shock, a giant earth-like arm slams the earth below causing the already shattered plains to collapse creating a giant rift splitting the land near the battlefield. As a giant earth splitting roar crosses the land, the creature rises from the ground revealing arms encrusted with stone, as it uses force to push its way out of the earth its arms grow in mass. Dark Myrtle green crystals protrude from the stone giants back, as the beast comes to full view the raging war suddenly stops, everyone becomes aware of the impending danger. As the giant destroys its way out of the crater it created the battlefield turns into chaos. Everyone frantically tries to escape the giant known by legend, tripping each other in order to get ahead; others deliberately take weapons and armor dropped by the terrified warriors. Before anyone flees past the nearside hills, the beast heaves a giant boulder across the plains landing on top of several horsemen, the boulder Shatters upon impact shooting shards in every direction. Flying through the air, the shards impale a couple dozen fleeing warriors. As another roar travels through the plains, several boulders are thrown creating a ring like boarder around the battlefield. Completely sealed in, the warriors of the Aincaad regiment prepare to stage an attack on the Myrtle Chrystal Titan.
     
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