I'm an aspiring writer who needs critique of her work. I got taken by Tate Publishing, I had my book all paid off and they went belly up. I didn't know how to join in on the class action law suit so I'm out of that money I paid over the years. I know I need help with the book, but my friend is being more amd more unfavorable the further he gets so I thought I would ask for a second opinion. Someone I can send the fantasy book to for them to go over chapter by chapter and suggest improvements. Or perhaps to tell me to quit trying to write and give up. I don't know. After all of my friend's comments I'm begining to to get quite discouraged. So I apeal to my fellow writers, does anyone want to go over my work?