Ok, so there is a pivotal scene in my WIP that I'm having trouble figuring out so I thought I'd turn to you creative minded people to help give me ideas and maybe stir my creative juices. Here's the sich: MC Jak is on a prison transport train going across the desert. MC Zelda (along with a few friends) comes to rescue him. During this sequence, the pivotal moment that has to happen is MC Zelda chooses to save MC Jak instead of the rest of the prisoners. I am debating possibly adding enemy attack helicopter in and/or city ruins if needed. Other tweaks can be made if an idea is good enough. MC Zelda's powers include healing and creating small protective shields (big enough for her and maybe 1-2 people). I'm trying to avoid cliche events like "oh, no, the train is careening out of control towards a canyon!" and also avoid the spider-man trope of "Badguy is going to make you choose if he kills Jak or these other people." It has feel realistic and organic. Thoughts, comments, ideas?