Tags:
  1. Tristan's Opa

    Tristan's Opa Senior Member

    Joined:
    Dec 22, 2018
    Messages:
    274
    Likes Received:
    480
    Location:
    Hickville in Virginia

    Music Use

    Discussion in 'The Lounge' started by Tristan's Opa, Dec 24, 2018.

    Music is always in my life, usually classic rock. I integrated my music into my MS when I began it years ago. Not long after, Guardians of the Galaxy was released and music was an integral part of the story. In fact, Peter and I share a very similar trait, we love our music. It actually helps me deal with my tinnitus.

    So my question is, should I continue using it in my story? Will I be considered a copycat of the GOTG style? Thanks in advance for any comments!

    Here's an outtake from my MS:

    The song filled his ears, loud and pounding, drowning out the hisses, voices and the general prattle of the hospital. Eyes closed to negate the sterile room and putrid smells, escaped into the music….

    Seasons don't fear the reaper
    Nor do the wind, the sun or the rain. we can be like they are
    Come on baby...don't fear the reaper
    Baby take my hand...don't fear the reaper
    We'll be able to fly...don't fear the reaper


    Ahhhhh… nothing like a lil Blue Oyster Cult to take your mind off the world Will mused. Classic rock did it totally right. Wish I could do the same for the smell of piss, disinfectant, vomit and something that reminded me of that dead possum in my garage a while back.
     
  2. Steerpike

    Steerpike Felis amatus Contributor

    Joined:
    Jul 5, 2010
    Messages:
    13,984
    Likes Received:
    8,557
    Location:
    California, US
    Be aware of copyright issues. If you’re going to traditionally publish, a publisher may want to cut the lyrics rather than go through the effort of securing permission for every song you quote. If you self-publish, then you can decide whether you want to take the risk of a copyright infringement lawsuit.

    As for how it works in the writing, could you just give the name of the song?
     
    Shenanigator and Carriage Return like this.
  3. Cave Troll

    Cave Troll It's Coffee O'clock everywhere. Contributor

    Joined:
    Aug 8, 2015
    Messages:
    17,922
    Likes Received:
    27,173
    Location:
    Where cushions are comfy, and straps hold firm.
    I agree with @Steerpike on this matter.
    Though you could describe the music and
    let it be at that as well.
    Only way to dodge around copyright issues
    is to use free domain songs with lyrics.

    Good luck.:superidea:
     
    Shenanigator and Tristan's Opa like this.
  4. Tristan's Opa

    Tristan's Opa Senior Member

    Joined:
    Dec 22, 2018
    Messages:
    274
    Likes Received:
    480
    Location:
    Hickville in Virginia
    I am definitely aware of copyright and use. My question was more concern over being seen as a copycat which distracts from the story. Perhaps I wasn't clear.
     
  5. Cave Troll

    Cave Troll It's Coffee O'clock everywhere. Contributor

    Joined:
    Aug 8, 2015
    Messages:
    17,922
    Likes Received:
    27,173
    Location:
    Where cushions are comfy, and straps hold firm.
    GIR IDK.gif

    I am not too familiar with adding lyrics in between narration in stories.
    I wouldn't say copycat, cause it has been done by others from what I know,
    so it is possible to do it. Style choice to add to atmosphere, I think.
     
    Tristan's Opa likes this.
  6. Veloci-Rapture

    Veloci-Rapture Member

    Joined:
    Dec 23, 2018
    Messages:
    47
    Likes Received:
    93
    Location:
    Ohio
    It won't be a copycat, any more that GotG was a copycat of Steven King, who was a copycat of Alan Dean Foster, who was probably a copycat of someone even further back.

    (Ok, so maybe Foster and King didn't copy each other, maybe they had similar ideas at the same time. I'm too lazy to go back and look up the publication dates for Spellsinger and The Shining, respectively).

    Using music in a novel is an old, time-tested concept. You're fine!
     
    Cave Troll and Tristan's Opa like this.
  7. Carriage Return

    Carriage Return Member

    Joined:
    Oct 7, 2018
    Messages:
    296
    Likes Received:
    250
    3
     
    Last edited: Dec 31, 2018
    Cave Troll and Tristan's Opa like this.
  8. Some Guy

    Some Guy Manguage Langler Supporter Contributor

    Joined:
    May 2, 2018
    Messages:
    6,738
    Likes Received:
    10,227
    Location:
    The kingdom of scrambled portmanteaus
    I use a hint of lyrics to date the setting.
     
    Cave Troll likes this.

Share This Page

  1. This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register.
    By continuing to use this site, you are consenting to our use of cookies.
    Dismiss Notice