Hey there! I've been hoping to get some feedback on my novel called Crows. It will be the first in at least a few books in the world that I've made. I'm an amateur college age writer, but I'm NOT an english major. That being said, I don't intend to submit this to a professional publisher until I've finished it and ironed out certain areas. This is why I'll be needing feedback. I'm writing it a bit like J.R.R. Tolkien did, which means there's a lot of background material, and in some areas I have difficulty introducing concepts about the magic in a natural way (This version just explains it at the beginning). Think about it as my own work, but in the same style as Eragon, the Wheel of Time, and Lord of the Rings. I'm looking forward to hearing what you guys may have to say about my work and reading some stuff that you guys have written!