Hello everyone... Not even completely sure if I am in the correct place to post my particular taste of poetry, but, I'll give it a try. All I am really looking for is a little feedback, maybe a generous comment or two.. hints, tips, suggestions. Be as brutal as you like.. no one gets any better if everyone who critiques your work is nice, right? Anyhow, if you have a taste for the darkside of human nature, give my pieces a view.. happy reading. You'll get honesty here fromother members critique. Welcome to the forum. ~Raven.
ah the darkness... it consumes and forsakes our sight... i've read your poem here already and all I can say is that it is excellent welcome aboard F
