I'm trying to write a good query letter for my memoir/narrative. plot summary: girl is at home, girl makes peace with home, girl moves away, girl's friend dies in horrible freak accident. I've written a few but honestly can't tell which is good or what else to do, any help is appreciated! Imperfectionist, oil painter, Italian marble sculptor, deer-whisperer, world traveler, thrift store film photographer: Arinda Green returns home from years abroad to her collapsing family in Wisconsin for three weeks before moving away forever. She never expected how fast her life would change, when a young artist is flying through life, will tragedy further the flight in her? When Arinda Green, a young traveling imperfectionist, returns home from a years away and abroad, she decides to write about her three weeks with her dysfunctional family before she moves away forever. How fast does a life change? When a young artist is flying through life, will tragedy further the flight in her?