So I've completly rewritten my short story. I went through the list of things I did wrong last time and removed the few that came up again. And now I'm left with all this text that I read and go, well, that's still rubbish. But I don't know what exactly is making it rubbish. I'm trying to edit without really know how to or what to edit and its driving me up the wall! I know everyone has their own editing process but I don't currently have one at all and I have spent the last three hours cutting and replacing then slightly tweaking the same four lines over and over again. Does anyone have a process for editing that might help? Thanks.