I've been reviewing my existing work of lately and there's some paragraphs and sentences which are blunt and sometimes hang in the air, literally. When you read them, no matter how you make it, they simply are cut right at the tip when you were expecting to finish off nicely and let the reader enjoy, it's like you give them a relaxing 100 km/h ride in a Mercedes and suddenly out of nowhere a brick wall comes in front. This is especially when it comes to descriptions. Any suggestions? More adjectives for example? Conjunctions, link the short, blunt sentences together? Thanks.