So I am writing a story, where the first part - the introduction - takes place in the near end of the novel. Here, my two protagonists are fighting the 'bad-guys' and one of the brothers are shot. Have you ever watched Narnia? When Edmund gets speared by the witch's sword/wand and every sound just disappear? I am trying to get that down on paper/keyboard, but every time I try, it just doesn't sound right. How would YOU describe such a scene?