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  1. CGB

    CGB Active Member

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    How would you describe this voice?

    Discussion in 'Word Mechanics' started by CGB, Sep 7, 2016.

    http://smite.gamepedia.com/Ah_Puch_voicelines (audio here, click on any of the examples)

    Specifically the, "I have eyes everywhere." (But also the tenor of the other lines).

    Also the laugh.

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    I am having a lot of trouble describing how his voice sounds. "Throaty, masculine, menacing" is pretty much the best I can do after a lot of thinking, but I'm sure someone has some other ideas?
     
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    izzybot Human Disaster Contributor

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    Throaty is good. I'd call it low and a bit raspy, as well. Maybe gravelly.
     
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    "Throaty, Ancient, Malevolent." That's the way I'd describe it at least. Hope that helps.
     
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    Like a rockslide.
     
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    OurJud Contributing Member Contributor

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    So, apart from badly acted and hammy, you mean?

    How about Brian Blessed with a sore throat?

    A demented Dalek?

    Someone with a throat full of Castrol GTX?
     
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    You guys are great, thanks so much
     
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    Seraph751 If I fell down the rabbit hole...

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    His voice rumbled...
     

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