Hey, I am Imprive, and I joined a little while ago. I skipped over this part by accident, but now I'm here to introduce myself. I am an avid Sci-fi reader, and I have recently started writing. At first I tried a novel, but after advice from several people I've decided to start small, with little short stories that I can someday combine into a book! Or something like that... Anyways, I recently finished my first short story and I really want to get a critque, because I currently feel it its the best showcase of my writing ability, and I want to see what others think.