I am trying to get this query letter right I would really appreciate some feedback. I introduce Moonbeam. A contemporary crime novel complete at 55k. Danny felt safe tucked away in the little Welsh seaside town. He just wanted to fish, drink the odd beer, and maybe get laid, now-and-then. But Megan, Facebook and a lost camera card collide and drag him back out into the open. He needs to choose; keep running, and leave Megan, Joe and Celia to the mercy of Ralph Teller, the gangster who was hunting him. Or head down to London and end this thing. Within two days, two are dead. Within another two, he’s arrested and being blackmailed by a bent cop, who is jockeying for position between rival drug dealers. By the end of the week, he needs to rescue Celia from Teller. In the process, a few more shit-heads die and he loses the one surviving member of his old army troop, Mouse. Problem is, the bent cop who still has hard evidence that could send both Danny and Megan to jail, is now owned by the remaining gangster. Danny needs an ally, one who can neutralise, DI Skelton. Then he can get back to his boat, some peace, but most of all, Megan.