I never been writing a lot of dialouge, recently I read a book where the author write his dialouge's something like this. He glanced back at the boy » Why aren't you in school? « Jake didn't really know what to say, » I... felt... sick « he replied studdering, then he started to prepare for the next question. I try to break up the monotony of the "he said, she said", by inserting action but I sometimes struggle to do this. I just feel like a complete newbie at the subject, advice?