Hi everyone! So I've mapped out a a story I'd like to write for my Creative Process class. Here are the story blocks I have: 1. Once upon a time there is a happy couple, Walter and Evelyn. Walter is in the military. What Evelyn does I do not know yet 2. Time goes on and Walter decides to propose to Kate. She accepts and all is dandy. 3. Before the marriage can occur Walter must leave and go fight in World War 1. 4. Walter leaves with his best friend Thomas, but before he leaves Evelyn says she will write to him everyday. 5. Walter is almost killed in a battle but Thomas saves his life. He writes to Evelyn about his near death incident. 6. In another battle Thomas is about to die but Walter saves him. However Walter is injured in the process. 7. He doesn't mention his injury to Evelyn in the letters. In a short time Walter dies due to his injuries. 8. Evelyn is not aware of her beloved's death so she continues to write him letters. 9. Thomas cannot bring himself to tell Evelyn what has happened so he writes letters back assuming Walter's identity. Thomas eventually falls for Evelyn and plans to propose when he comes home. 10. Thomas arrives and sees Evelyn. He explains what actually happens and attempts to hug her. Evelyn pushes him back jumps aboard the train and runs away never to be seen again. For starters I know the ending is awful, I just couldn't think of a proper ending. Would it be better if she died? I'm desperately in need of suggestions. As for the rest of the plot-what do y'all think? Is it interesting? What could make it better? I'm really open to any and all suggestions/criticisms. Thanks!