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  1. Banzai

    Banzai One-time Mod, but on the road to recovery Contributor

    Mar 31, 2007
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    jo spumoni - Weekly Poetry Contest (186) Winner

    Discussion in 'Bi-Weekly Poetry Contest Archives' started by Banzai, Mar 30, 2012.

    The Southern Californian and the Snow
    By jo spumoni

    I dreamed of a white Christmas
    Like Bing Crosby said I should
    So I bought myself some mittens
    And a jacket with a hood

    I drove up to the mountains
    The road winding to and fro
    Searching for the shimmer
    Of the freshly fallen snow

    And when at last I found it
    Amidst the tranquil green
    Of the forest and the pine trees
    Just like a Christmas scene

    I stepped out to admire it
    And feel the mountain's hold
    Only to discover
    That snow is really cold!
  2. pinkgiraffe

    pinkgiraffe Member

    Jan 6, 2012
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    Well done Jo! It's an entertaining poem with a great rhythm and structure.
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