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    Discussion in 'Point of View, and Voice' started by JWE1985, May 24, 2023.

    In a fantasy script I'm writing, I used French as a language for a scene. It only used like once, but I was concerned that it's a cop-out to use a actually language for a fantasy setting. Thoughts?
     
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    I will use a mix of Germany and English for place names. For the feel of a different world. but that is the extent of my use of other languages. An entire scene in French without any translation would turn off most American readers.
     
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    Well, it's used in one bit between two characters. I was hoping under the pretense of "use it once" logic I could sneak it in. *Fingers crossed*
     
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    I moved this out of the Workshop as it is not a original piece for critique. Just an FYI.
     
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    Does your fantasy world have a connection to our own, like Narnia? If so, then you could plausibly have characters there speak in any human language. It might add either some interesting depth or a bit of levity, depending on how you handle it.

    But if your world isn't connected to ours, like Middle Earth or Westeros, then I wouldn't use a real human language (other than the primary one you're writing in, presumably English) unless you intend it as a joke or Easter Egg. It would either confuse people or make them laugh when you don't want them to. If it's only a line or two, you can probably just make up some gibberish and call it whatever; there's no need to invent a real language.
     
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    Well the "World" IS Earth...millennium years later. My thinking was that some languages survived, and/or cultures either survived or adapted.
     

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