Now I am going to handle this a bit differently. This here thread is for making a list of things I have to watch out for in my writing. Things to avoid like plague, what I should steer clear of or the opposite - what I should do. - NOT tying more than one action to one sentence. Make it two. Or three. Except in very specific circumstances. Be very specific. Take your time. Or mine. - No stubs. Again, use very sparingly, and not get taken in by close POV. It is - mostly - not necessary Feel free to add if you'd had a sample of my writing! This is a specific invitation, yes, I do mean YOU lurking and reading this!