I thought it might be interesting to have a thread where people can work on their loglines and get some feedback. They can be pretty hard to write. 27 words to sum up character, goal, plot, motivation, antagonist. I know I'm having issues with mine. It feels a bit stumpy. Here's what I have so far - When an amnesiac cop's identity is challenged, he dares to take charge of safeguarding a nymphet, who survived an attack, putting both their lives in danger.