Hey, I'm looking for several people to read the first chapter of an experimental fantasy book I've finished. Deliberately looking for people that know nothing about the work or me to get fresh thoughts. Will happily review and critique in return (and might even do so for the rest of your book too!) I'm up for being both a long-term or short term reviewer for you. Thanks.
You might want to try throwing it into the workshop if it is just a first chapter...if you are not comfortable with throwing it that far to the wolves, you can pm me and I'll give it a read
