Hello! My sentences are quite mechanical, but I'm having trouble rephrasing any of them without some kind of "X did Y". Take this paragraph, for example: She straightened her skirt and sat down on one of the logs. Ulfius noticed her and broke away from his guard duty. He kneeled down next to her and lit the campfire. I absolutely can't find a way to rephrase those last that, to avoid "he noticed, he kneeled and lit". I tried "Ulfius noticed her and broke away from his guard duty, kneeling down next to her to light the campfire" but it doesn't flow well and is far too long in my opinion. Also, there's a repetition of to. Anyone have any suggestions?