For instance: is this just a selection of pretty words or does it mean anything to you? "The glace on the window shivers as the gale makes its last breath a nightmare."
Not written this way no... perhaps The ice on the window shivers as the gale makes its last breath a nightmare.
I can figure out the "glace" part (thank you, high school French class) but the unclear antecedent for "its" is tricky. Technically it refers back to the gale... was that the intended meaning?
