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  1. Stammis

    Stammis Senior Member

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    Micropoetry, mean anything?

    Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Stammis, Jul 9, 2017.

    For instance: is this just a selection of pretty words or does it mean anything to you?

    "The glace on the window shivers as the gale makes its last breath a nightmare."
     
  2. Earp

    Earp Copy That Contributor

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    I'd say the former.
     
  3. ladybird

    ladybird Senior Member

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    Not written this way no... :(

    perhaps
    The ice on the window shivers as the gale makes its last breath a nightmare.
     
  4. BayView

    BayView Huh. Interesting. Contributor

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    I can figure out the "glace" part (thank you, high school French class) but the unclear antecedent for "its" is tricky. Technically it refers back to the gale... was that the intended meaning?
     

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