My latest story

Has great characters. Most of them are well-developed and I love them but the plot is weak. Anyway, it's kind of a creative vent for me, and if you read some of my character profiles (which consist of only one right now but two others are complete and will be posted later, and they will be updated . . . every day?) and get some ideas they would be greatly appreciated. It's fantasy, and takes place in a small town, following the main character, Tshana. This is going to be abundant in magic and such, and may even be fairytale-like at parts. Like I said, it's a creative vent. Thanks,

 

I wouldn't mind reading more about this.

 

Great! As soon as I have a name I'll be constructing a website where one can read the story as well as learn some stuff about characters. Meanwhile, on the character development page I have Tshana's profile according to a chart as well as the villain's on the "villians" thread. Thanks,

 

I am still new to this site. I can't seem to find where the profiles are. Would you mind copying and pasting them here?

 

oops . . . didn't mean to double post. Anyway, sure.

 

I can paste links and hope they work . . .
Tshana's profile: In-depth Character Sheet - Page 3 - Writing Forums (also might have to find)
Everhart's profile: Charactor Workshop - Page 2 - Writing Forums (might have to scroll to find it)
Lockhart's profile: Charactor Workshop - Page 3 - Writing Forums (might have to scroll down till you find it)
Prelude: Writing Forums
An exert: Writing Forums

 

Thanks when I have some free time from school work I'll take a look.

 

Maybe a little to Much???

I think its awesome

 

I am not the best story critique, but it seems interesting to me.